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majnu
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0 posted 2005-12-27 02:57 AM


To Joy

I.
Lewey said that as we realize we must lose,
That in the gaining of knowledge we choose
To let go what is more precious than we know,
And in the process appear to grow.

Yet even still  I can imagine a gnome running by,
Or beyond the next turn a stair up into the sky,
Perhaps over the hill a mere where fay are at play
And the beasts have their say.

The Peter in my heart cannot win this fight,
The Pan is too strong and longs to take flight;
Though a mature exterior I may long show,
This boy will forever know how to crow.
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with a nod to honeybunch who reminded me of certain things.



-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

[This message has been edited by majnu (12-27-2005 05:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-12-27 10:07 AM


This is too wonderful to go unnoticed.
I am keeping this gem in my library.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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2 posted 2005-12-27 12:06 PM


"The Peter in my heart cannot win this fight,
The Pan is too strong and longs to take flight;
Though a mature exterior I may long show,
This boy will forever know how to crow."

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!
A keeper indeed!
May the child in your heart live on forever!
Hugs~Nancy

iliana
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3 posted 2005-12-27 12:18 PM


majnu - Much enjoyed this poem, so much so, I'm saving it!   ....jo
Honeybunch
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4 posted 2005-12-27 02:44 PM


It's always good to be reminded - too easy to forget.  Nodding back at you.  Enjoyed your poem.
Helen

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5 posted 2005-12-27 03:01 PM


smiling here maj.

Methinks you have found the perfect balance...

Much enjoyed this piece.

majnu
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6 posted 2005-12-27 05:41 PM


thanks to you all for the read.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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