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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-27 07:15 AM


I would know the warm of your back
when you might lean against me
looking at different things
other than the differences of me

but freindly enough to tell me
what you could imagine
in a crowded room of approval
if you were not wearing those gloves

and I didn't mind you touching
the gifts of wise men not intended
for the casual consumption
but more for an acquired taste

and I would promise to be selfish
if it made you feel more worthy
to water the tree of me by the door
after those gifts were exchanged

between the two of us with windows


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dark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-12-27 08:00 AM



That's pretty wanting...

lovely, D.  

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
2 posted 2005-12-27 01:15 PM


DS

"I would know the warm of your back
when you might lean against me
looking at different things"

Familiar and comforting.  

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2005-12-27 03:22 PM


You make me sigh...you truly are a gifted man, D.

I love when you go "there".

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2005-12-27 03:33 PM


most humble thanks ladies..

each of you has blessed me
in a way that is special


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