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love-fool - rp...(mah mood made me do it)
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love-fool - rp...(mah mood made me do it) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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in days gone of you i look back to picnic rugs seasides and coffee shops i see you there almost perfect with the straightness of your smile your eyes to the sky all flighty and fickle... and there i am flowing on a string in the wind, flapping carelessly like those clowns with stars in their eyes, love-sick complexions and decorated lips... tasting the sand. how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more ~Neruda~ |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
what a cool poem darky , wild and free i love it !!!  peace ~wolfy xoxo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, Maree - this reminded me of a tune, shared - "Magic Carpet Ride" by Steppenwolf. It be an anthem of sorts . . . and your words just brought me right back there. Thank you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome! I love it and I am keepin' it! hugs, Chris |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree You are a warm summer breeze and ziz zag kite on string...yes, with a smiley face. Loved this poem!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow! this one flies! such cool imagery the way you let us take a peek at YOU  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like some one i knew and did a juggling act for,then fell off the tightrope trying to hold onto this badboy  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Love this, Maree... and I love Martie's reply too... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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