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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-12-25 08:15 AM

Unwrapped

listening to the carols
  to fill this mind with ease
to take away the sting of loss
  the past of time in freeze

"rightened" all the wrongs this year
  creating life anew
but here i sit on morning's watch
  alone again, not two

a lesson seems to be in site
  for when this day is through
there is no solace i can find
  here being without you

path of love seems distant still
  the future black and white
a package wrapped in foiled thought
  whose meaning loses sight

blinded by the lack of know
  the order "your domain"
leaves me, less than candles warmth
  when myst has lost it's reign.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-12-25 08:40 AM

This is the opposite
of what will be...
but I'm glad for this gift,
of poetry.

Merry Christmas, Maureen.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-12-25 11:51 AM

Sad words but maybe it just stores up for when the good times hit

Dave

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2005-12-25 02:51 PM

Maureen....

Merry Christmas

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

4 posted 2005-12-25 06:24 PM

nakdthoughts you always write so beautifully.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2005-12-25 06:58 PM

I understand, Maureen. Presents can never replace Prescence, can they?

Merry Christmas, dear lady

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2005-12-25 08:37 PM

Sending a hug, a smile and wishes for you to
have a wonderful holiday and year ahead of
you.

All the best for ya.

Barry

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2005-12-25 09:06 PM

Merry Christmas, Maureen...

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2005-12-26 09:40 AM

Sad but so well expressed Maureen

Eric

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