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coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

0 posted 2005-12-24 08:09 PM

in quests of self discovery
across introspective seas
beneath quiet eyes
she spoke desire

organic hashish dreams
on weed and water pipe
gave way to synthetic experience
played through opal corneas
from lysergic spirit realms

kinetic passions raged
pulsating nebulae
burned infrared
burst inside her
between heaving breasts
her heart artillery
destroyed his coital armada
with meteors and moonlight

"Only the dead, haveeee seen the end of war."
Plato

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-12-24 09:00 PM

Talk about
making a moment...

Well done!

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2005-12-24 09:15 PM

Thanks for reading, Karilea.

Your comments always brighten my day.
Kinda like Sunshine, come to think of it.

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

3 posted 2005-12-27 05:37 PM

I just posted my galactic poem. Its called pluto. Not sure it's as good as this one or not but each has their own preference of style.

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-12-27 06:11 PM

lol
enjoyed the rush of this

can't believe it'll stay long in open tho
am really really grinning here at the imagery

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

5 posted 2005-12-27 06:26 PM

Hey thanks for reading, Manowolves.

I'll check out your write.

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

6 posted 2005-12-27 06:28 PM

Thanks for the bump, Kacy. (smile)

Remember, the images are all in your mind.

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

7 posted 2005-12-28 05:21 PM

ohh my what a vision you have
cool stuff ~jw

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2005-12-28 05:55 PM

Yeah, no joke...the images are all in your
mind...and I had to turn off the tube due
top sensory overload!!!

Nicely done...

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

9 posted 2005-12-28 06:54 PM

Thanks for the read, JW.

Glad ya liked it!

coyote 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

10 posted 2005-12-28 06:56 PM

Thanks, Magnus.

LoL on the sensory overload, man.

CB 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

11 posted 2005-12-29 12:01 PM

Very intresting write. Enjoyed this. Lots of luck,
bgj

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2005-12-29 12:09 PM

Peyote, I mean "Coyote", this blew my mind! ~ literally!

Fascinating read!

EA

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

13 posted 2005-12-29 08:23 AM

Thanks for reading, bgj.

Good luck to you as well.

CB 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

14 posted 2005-12-29 08:27 AM

Thanks, Earth Angel.

If anyone could really get into this write it should be you, babe.(Smiles)

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

15 posted 2005-12-29 12:45 PM

organic hashish dreams
on weed and water pipe
gave way to synthetic experience
played through opal corneas
from lysergic spirit realms

Very beautiful

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

16 posted 2005-12-29 03:10 PM

Billy, wow.. such brilliant imagery here...absolutely love it.

Great to read you m'friend...

and please forgive my absence, here and in yer snail mail box. It'll be there soon

give lil Ian a BIG kiss for me k?

maree xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

17 posted 2005-12-29 08:37 PM

Dominique-Simone,

I thank you for reading my work and calling it "beautiful".

For those very words, I would use to describe you.

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

18 posted 2005-12-29 08:41 PM

Maree, "woman of heart and mind" (to quote Joni Mitchell).

Thank You so much and know that Ian......
and I...... cherish your friendship.

You are a beautifully unique human being.

Hugs,
Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

19 posted 2005-12-31 02:43 AM

wow,
I mean the passion alone
blew me away
not to mention the talent who wrote it.
intense, I liked it.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

20 posted 2005-12-31 02:44 AM

Dang, Billy
this IS thick . . .

took me on a trip . . . *grin*

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

21 posted 2005-12-31 07:10 PM

Thank You for the passionate read, exhale.

Just....exhale and you'll be o.k. (smile)

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

22 posted 2005-12-31 07:12 PM

Thanks, Sue.

Have a nice trip...
through the thicket.

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

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