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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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0 posted 2005-12-31 05:26 PM



Life Like Me


As I woke up,
The punishing ginger sun
Pierced through the window
Only to char my eyes.

I threw on some clothes,
Grabbed my bag,
And I left the room.
I’m sorry, I said to you
As I left
But you didn’t listen.

No,
There was no sound that day.
Only a bitter-sweet banter that spewed
From the lockjaw of failure.

As I laid on the butcher’s block
Awaiting the man’s blade to drop upon me.
I remembered you,
I wished time would stop,
But without time I could not be free.

I lost you to the wretched world.
I lost myself to my own reality.

You said,
I’m an infectious being
Without reason
Without premise.
But still you loved me.

You were right,
Which is why I’m not right for you.
I love you,
That will never change.
But I can’t be with you.
I guess that’s just life,
Life like me…

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Gaia
1 posted 2005-12-31 07:08 PM


wow!
what a write
grabbed me, by the throat

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-12-31 07:29 PM


the lockjaw of failure
( a great line)

You said,
I’m an infectious being
Without reason
Without premise.
But still you loved me.

You were right,
Which is why I’m not right for you.
I love you,
That will never change.
But I can’t be with you.
I guess that’s just life,
Life like me…


I think I know someone like that~~~ sighing~~

M

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