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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-12-24 03:56 PM



Essence like strength
tang in something invading senses with dreams of potency you believe

A vapour clinging mist
images calling for survival in their potency of belief

Dancing in your mind
they dance in their mists of vapour in your ideas demanding identification life thought

In existence
You dance

And your thoughts
Dance

In existence

And

Comes the Christmas Dinner

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-12-24 09:52 PM



This

tang

tings!



Merry Christmas, Bodger!



iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2005-12-26 03:06 AM


Enjoyed this!  Hope the dinner was tastety!   .....jo
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-12-26 06:00 AM


And your thoughts
Dance

In existence

And

Comes the Christmas Dinner


EXACTLY!

Hope you had a nice Christmas,
M

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2005-12-26 08:21 AM


My thoughts are always dancing , as for Chrstmas dinner , I ate too much

Hope

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2005-12-26 10:02 AM


Great perspective and a good read!

Eric

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
6 posted 2005-12-26 01:50 PM


Thanks

Dave

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