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...The present...
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...The present... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 . You give me a present placing it gently into my hand embarrassed for yourself.. Pretty white and green ribbons are set in a delicately placed arrangement on the corner of the flowered wrapping paper.. No card I hold this gift in my trembling hands I look up at you looking back at me I wonder. . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The best of gifts often come in the wrapping and the spirit, don't they Nancy?!! Hugs, and Merry Christmas! TD |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A perfect read.... Thank you for this gift! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Is it MY present???? From you to ME???? On our way Teed. Listen for the jingles! Oh, awesome write by the way. luv ya!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow!! A triple play!! Look! It's magic! All three replies were posted at the same time! Oh, it must be Christmas!!!! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
greatpoetry Nancy - you write so very well - Paul |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker this is a tender poem...full of love and anticipation. Beautiful... believe in what your heart feels... |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
you open the present inside -a photo of me! you faint with happiness fades out stage left arthur |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Beautiful All you ever asked for and never expected to receive Have a Good Christmas Dave |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nancy...As always perfectly written. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
Merry Christmas  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a beautiful thing, something small but precious..that makes the hand tremble and the heart race out of control... Merry Christmas Nance....you deserve all the best.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, Nancy and Merry Christmas... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a precious moment, Nancy! Hope your Christmas was merry!  ....jo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A super read....Thanks for those thoughts! Eric |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
A gift so beautiful you can't stop the tears Great write! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Lovingly said and felt, Nancy Lee. We need the word "beautyscape" for yours. Hugs Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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