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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-12-23 06:13 AM

Hum in blue musical tone,
doleful, but hurt my heart,
sing of things sad and alone,
of love lost, forced apart.
Strike deep inside my soul,
strain heart tendril strings,
fan my amber glowing coal,
induce in me, loving eye stings.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.
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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-12-23 08:40 PM

Goldenrose,
I do like your style. This expresses the pain well.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
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