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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-12-17 09:39 AM




The Silence Made No Sense


Communication is that part
That seems to be broken
I still have many thoughts
Since you had last spoken

Communication breakdown
You said was momentary
Yet it has broken that link
That connected you and me

Communication is my need
Why am I left in suspense
Momentary lasted months
The silence made no sense

Communication is the point
The issue of which I speak
While you gave me strength
It appears you became weak

Communication gives clarity
It does become necessary
What are you holding back
I still hope you could tell me

Communication is to convey
It should never be too late
Break down those barriers
We do need to communicate

Hope ©2005
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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-12-17 11:35 AM


Hope

If you are writing this as a personal:

Communication is a TX - RX transmission

Snapping out of something is not easy

Communication that was prized and said to be forever, fails with a lot of people, who never have the guts to fall in love, but take someone who has fallen in love.

Change your style, change your dress, think back to what you were before you met

You have talent, you have ability, you have life

Dont squander it

Dave

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2005-12-17 11:45 AM


Thank you Dave for your thoughtful  reply . Yes I do get on with life , yet still feel the need to communicate , I will leave the door open .

Hope

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-12-17 01:43 PM


Just check who comes in the back way

I lived words you wrote that wrote words maybe in your mind sharing emotions feelings aliveness

It's easy to write words when it isn't you
To take that fire dampoem it and make sure the coals are high

For a cold winter

We all love we all desire

but very

Few!

Can the ability, skill, desire and emotion to write words

That are read

Take care

Dave

Ericc
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4 posted 2005-12-17 02:58 PM


Great write!

Eric

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2005-12-18 06:16 AM


Hope, you are so right.  Without communication, a relationship/friendship/business relationship/ is shipwrecked.  In fact, without communication in any kind of relationship, we actually have nothing.  

By all means, keep the door open, but I hope it won't bring disappointment.  

- Owl

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
6 posted 2005-12-18 09:55 AM


LACK OF COMMUNICATION.THE SILENT CURSE.PAUL

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

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