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The Silence Made No Sense
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The Silence Made No Sense |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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The Silence Made No Sense Communication is that part That seems to be broken I still have many thoughts Since you had last spoken Communication breakdown You said was momentary Yet it has broken that link That connected you and me Communication is my need Why am I left in suspense Momentary lasted months The silence made no sense Communication is the point The issue of which I speak While you gave me strength It appears you became weak Communication gives clarity It does become necessary What are you holding back I still hope you could tell me Communication is to convey It should never be too late Break down those barriers We do need to communicate Hope ©2005 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_802259.html |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hope If you are writing this as a personal: Communication is a TX - RX transmission Snapping out of something is not easy Communication that was prized and said to be forever, fails with a lot of people, who never have the guts to fall in love, but take someone who has fallen in love. Change your style, change your dress, think back to what you were before you met You have talent, you have ability, you have life Dont squander it Dave |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Dave for your thoughtful reply . Yes I do get on with life , yet still feel the need to communicate , I will leave the door open . Hope |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Just check who comes in the back way I lived words you wrote that wrote words maybe in your mind sharing emotions feelings aliveness It's easy to write words when it isn't you To take that fire dampoem it and make sure the coals are high For a cold winter We all love we all desire but very Few! Can the ability, skill, desire and emotion to write words That are read Take care Dave |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hope, you are so right. Without communication, a relationship/friendship/business relationship/ is shipwrecked. In fact, without communication in any kind of relationship, we actually have nothing. By all means, keep the door open, but I hope it won't bring disappointment. - Owl |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
LACK OF COMMUNICATION.THE SILENT CURSE.PAUL shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness |
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