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Innocent Believers
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Innocent Believers |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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It's six O'clock in the morning first night alone's slipped away the curtains on this open window flutter as light breeze's play and I stare out at the lonely street gazing through the misty rain sittin here thinkin bout why we said good-bye yesterday. Chorus: we got Wrapped up in each other searching for that one true love but we ended up like strangers lying in each others arms we thought we shared the feelings lovers share deep in their soul but we were innocent believers in dreams we'd never know In two more hours I leave this room to drift into the working day and know I'll see you round sometime but things'll never be the same Still I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease this pain cause this emptiness I must confess has filled my heart again. Chorus: we got Wrapped up in each other searching for that one true love but we ended up like strangers lying in each others arms we thought we shared the feelings lovers share deep in their soul but we were innocent believers in dreams we'd never know |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
but we were innocent believers in dreams we'd never know love those lines Eric M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was beautifully articulated.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 Impressive! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Spot on, as always~ Wishing you and yours the Merriest of Christmas~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful... your words flow so gently. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...You are so good at the sad love song! It's good to see you posting..it seems like it's been a long time! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eric, I hereby add my two cents worth to this chorus of admirers...what sad but very nice lyrics! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you all for the kind words I appreciate them very much. |
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