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What Would it Take
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What Would it Take |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA 
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What would it take for you to see me To see who I am To discover my thoughts To realize my passions to understand my feelings TO believe in my dreams Thats all that I want To know I am simple Looking for simple things Not Rubys or Emerald or Diamonds No monetary things Unconditional love Yea theres a ring there Just a thought from you TO show you still care I know it seem like so much But really I'm a simple being I know what planet I'm on Yet it seems were worlds away This is just a thought Nothing really to see But just so you know I still think of you and me Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I know what planet I'm on Yet it seems were worlds away" understand this...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is just a thought Nothing really to see But just so you know I still think of you and me very sweet sentiments. Nicely written simOriah. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thinking.... Loved this, and unconditional love, is the answer! just the basic, trust, attention, affection, etc...and of course some romantic poetry LOL! a song or two written for me...just kidding! ~ARH  |
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