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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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Print-Out To DF 30 June 2005 Ocean-far, I watch the sun soften your smile and lift it upwards, secure and sweet. I see your shoulders free against the blue sky and your hands quiet like a butterfly on a stone. I am so glad that you let me be your solemn solace. - Owl |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You have seen such depths....and that line, of quietness like a butterfly on a stone...if I can figure out where I parked my time machine last time, I'm gonna go back and write it first! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I see your shoulders free against the blue sky and your hands quiet like a butterfly on a stone." Such beauty in these words. Hugs~Nancy |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, RatLeader and Enchantress. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Giggles, Ratleader at your time machine! May I have a ride in it too? As long as I can get back again! I'd hate to lose any of my precious 60 years. - Owl |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Aw, this is sweet. Kristabell |
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goth_chick19 New Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 4Australia |
This is really good  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well, one should only ride in those things while sober -- or at least write down what decade you parked it in....it's a pain to have to go searching all over town for it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks Kristabell and Goth_chick. Glad you liked it. Ratleader, I am always sober (except for once in 1968), and if you're driving, I sure won't go unless you are driving sober! I'd say, also, it's sorta important to know what decade you parked in! - Owl |
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