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Ace33
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since 2005-12-09

Posts 8

0 posted 2005-12-13 07:17 AM

I'm trying to change back to the way it was when you met me//

I thought i was over you but not completely//

In the beginning it was all good//

to make you happy i did whatever i could//

now a days all we do is argue//

i don't call anymore because i don't want to bother you//

and when i see you i never speak//

because i don't want you to notice how you make me weak//

as i stand on my feel i do not beg and plead//

it's up to you to realize i'm what you need//

© Copyright 2005 Ace33 - All Rights Reserved

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-12-13 07:37 AM

"because i don't want you to notice how you make me weak"

Great line.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-12-13 06:58 PM

Ace, welcome to Pips! Ditto Susan's choice of fine line picks.
Nicely written, poignant.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-12-14 07:43 PM

This poem makes me feal a wee bit blue.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-12-15 03:04 PM

Strange, but I feel a connection to your words somehow....

enjoyed your thoughts, thanks for sharing them~

~ARH

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