»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #36
»
Dear Dad
| Open Poetry #36 |
|
Dear Dad |
|
|
Daddys_Girl_4ever Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 10Mass, USA |
Dear dad, It’s that time again I wish you were here Making me laugh But you’re not You’re in heaven I miss you I hate cancer It sucks It took you away And now you’re never coming back Every day I want you back I cry because you’re not here Can you hear me cry? I miss you so much Merry Christmas where ever you are Love, Minna December 12, 2005 Live life like you are going to die tomorrow |
||
| © Copyright 2005 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very touching write Minna. Many of us here have lost someone special, and we lean on each other often. Welcome to these pages of blue.  seek the flame within yourself |
||
|
IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Short. Simple. Raw. No frilly words, no organized rhyme or meter. Just pure emotion that seems to carry you over. |
||
|
Daddys_Girl_4ever Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 10Mass, USA |
I still miss him very much,  Live life like you are going to die tomorrow |
||
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this time of year does bring out the memories and the longing for family or loved ones. thats why time is precious and love is special. enjoy what and when you can so memories of love and happiness fill the hole of emptyness. and one can smile and know they are there are always there My spirit will rise |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...hugs...we always miss those we care for...James |
||
|
aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
welcome to pip your write has strong emotion and much love ..he would be proud peace and follow your dreams ~wolf |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I feel your loss in your words and miss my father also... M |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions... and I am deeply sorry for the loss of your father. . |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Minna...a very touching tribute to your father. I look forward to reading more of you. Welcome to Pip! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more of your words. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
||
|
Daddys_Girl_4ever Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 10Mass, USA |
I'll always miss him.. Live life like you are going to die tomorrow |
||
|
loveofcalvary New Member
since 2005-12-13
Posts 3 |
That was touching, and it was right to the point. The message is clear, and it really relates to most of us. 'Cause things can never really be so simple... Nice job! |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Minna, welcome to Passions. Your poem is filled with heartfelt passion, an element that is sometimes missing in poetry posts which use flowery words to convey what you did so well with some simple but powerful straight-to-the-heart phrases. |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Welcome to Passions. It is a good place to share and express your grief. Done lots of that myself. I am sorry for your loss. Write a bunch more and I'll read. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
