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garysgirl
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0 posted 2005-12-07 07:06 AM


I vowed this never to happen again
The total trust of my life with another
For when the other must be away
To feel as if I will then smother

Seems I appear to be with this feel again
For it hurts so much for us to be apart
Yet, the loving of you feels so good
And together is when our real life starts

Though the feel within is torture
When from me you are far away
I still think it is worth it all
So, within my heart, I allow you to stay

I know I can trust you with my all
For you would give your life for me
It is proven with your unconditional love
Which every day that appears, I see

A love where you think first of me
Of what for me is for always the best
The bond between our hearts is there to stay
For each day it withstands an endurance test

Bond feels perfect between our two hearts
Therefore, we pray it never departs


© Copyright 2005 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2005-12-07 09:07 AM


Ethel,

man oh man, you are readin' my mind this morning:

I vowed this never to happen again
The total trust of my life with another


and that unconditional love?  Is SO rare.
Savor it . .  keep it .  . hold it inside and do not let it go . . . its a bond, soulspeak . . . bloodink . . . forever.


Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-12-07 09:27 AM




You deserve it Ethel!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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3 posted 2005-12-07 12:34 PM


Thanks to the both of you Sweeties. And
thank you for understanding.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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4 posted 2005-12-08 02:46 AM


You look so pretty in love, Ethel!   ....jo
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5 posted 2005-12-12 11:40 AM


Thank you, Iliana....it just doesn't feel so
pretty sometimes....when we are missing each
other so much!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2005-12-13 09:53 PM


Ethel Mae, you have something I know exists. Even though it's hard to believe sometimes. Like sue said, it's so rare. and yet arrives in many different kinds of relationship.

And i know how much you do appreciate it. and love it. and never take it for granted. and thats such an admirable quality. It's a scary feeling, that you write about, i completely agree. I'm so happy, that despite the fear of trusting someone so deeply again, you're just getting on with it!

Good to read you again,

Love ya.


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