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silverwind Junior Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 37that place over there |
Are you as sensual as your poetry suggests or is it just an illusion, like your words? If I propose to meet you would you become afraid? or are you as brave as the words you write? Would our restaurant be as romantic as promised in your lines would your love for me be as passionate as the passion in your rhymes? Are you as handsome as the person that writes could you make me desire long romantic nights? Are your kisses as soft as you would have me believe or are they so cold as to make my heart grieve? Would you treat as gently as your poetry imparts or would you leave me crying with a broken heart? Are your promises as sincere as your poetry suggests or are they just images in your mind, are you as cruel as in some of your verse or are you really, very kind? And does your heart beat with a passion so rare or are you someone who just doesn't care? Can you tell me truthfully that you've seen all manner of things from the floors of the oceans, to Saturns rings? Or are you just a dreamer, a weaver of prose a writer of illusion a magician, in poets clothes? silverwind |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Or are you just a dreamer, a weaver of prose a writer of illusion a magician, in poets clothes?" I enjoyed this piece..made me stop and think. As a writer many things are just an illusion. How do we really know what the person behind the words if really like. Well done! Hugs~Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
My you are good! best, martyjo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Speaking for myself...I am just me, and moreso in my poetry! Enjoyed this...made me wonder who you are writing this to. I hope you get truth in reply.  |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
i absolutely loved this. the flow is what got me the most. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You will have to determine the truth of whom you write. As for me, what you see is what you get ... and that is true for most of us that have written more than 200 works  Kinda hard to hide your true self for that long a period of time...Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only you will know in kind... the poets' words and the poets' mind... . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SilverWind~ I adore this  ... I'll just bet that whoever inspired this doesn't even recognize who they are~I can only speak for me ... I (most often) am all I pen ... well, that is me and 37 muses of varying talents~ This is just a marvelous p>nder for us all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
our spirits pen truths My spirit will rise |
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silverwind Junior Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 37that place over there |
My heartfelt thanks to everyone that took the time to read my work and also for taking the time to reply. Please believe me when I say that I take each and every individual reply close to my heart for the warm feeling that they create there. silverwind |
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