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Open Poetry #36

Love And Memories

lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-07-17 08:52 AM

Love And Memories

O' darkness which cannot see, swept away by painted skies that walk of heavens. Visions behold terms with me in peace, drinking in my fill of day as waters covers me. This delight of the almighty shades my eyes upon his canvas of living colors. How he is counsel to these beautiful seas and clouds of majesty. That suspends the earth that binds up the oceans as the boundaries of radiance highlight such an illustrious enterprise of love inspiring beauty. It brings back the feeling of that touch of that lovely hand, the path of sand that rose beneath our feet. The destined place of paradise we always spoke about. That of every dream alive that has cast us into the fires of our heart. It makes it feel like the very first day we met. Like days are fresh within, and the bow is renewed in my hand.

Author (C) Kevin Brian Wright

passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-07-17 07:31 PM

nice thoughts here

lyricpoet
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2 posted 2005-07-17 10:04 PM

thanks

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2005-07-19 01:31 AM

" It brings back the feeling of that touch of that lovely hand, the path of sand that rose beneath our feet. The destined place of paradise we always spoke about. That of every dream alive that has cast us into the fires of our heart. It makes it feel like the very first day we met."

this is soft and romantic

lyricpoet
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4 posted 2005-07-19 06:40 AM

Thank you for your thought on my work.

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-07-19 07:26 AM

quit an Exquisite write...very much enjoyed the feeling this gives the reader, along with the sound....wonderful!

garysgirl

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6 posted 2005-07-20 06:18 PM

This is so beautiful I really
enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel GG

lyricpoet
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7 posted 2005-07-20 06:19 PM

thank you, much

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