evomx5
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since 2005-07-11
Posts 52
Atlanta, GA
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2005-07-20
06:50 AM
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He stands in the doorway to watch her walk past Each day the same thing, his eyes to cast On this vision of beauty that clouds his mind And makes his heart for others, blind
Always in the shadows, never daring to talk But today is different, he steps out as she walks Past his little café and he hands her a note Full of the feelings that he wrote
She smiles at him and walks away Clutching the note not a word does she say Till she gets down the block and out of his sight She unfolds the paper she held so tight
And reads of a love for her she’s never known A love that no man to her has shown She walks back toward him with trepidation His heart is fluttering with anticipation
They meet at the doorway and go inside No one is there, they don’t have to hide They let free the passion they have for each They share the climax they both have reached
Alone at a table they sit and talk Until finally it’s time to finish her walk She says, “I’ll be back” and fumbles in her tote And hands him a worn and tattered note
That tells of a love for him he’s never known A love that no woman to him has shown And as he reads he knows for sure He will spend eternity here with her.
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2005-07-20
08:22 AM
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another lovely write, you are indeed so much in love...wishing you the best...
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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2005-07-20
09:04 AM
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There is something so romantic about him owning a cafe'. lol...I realize I am nuts but so don't care.
Coffee and Chocolate. That is what his cafe' sells.
This pulled me in until I became her.
Loved it!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2005-07-20
09:08 AM
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B E A U T I F U L ! !
Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near. When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back
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Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
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2005-07-20
10:31 AM
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Oh I simply love this wonderful poem...It brought tears of joy to my eyes as I read it...Simply beautiful...*big hugs*
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
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2005-07-20
12:55 PM
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oh my gosh....you aren't supposed to make us cry without a warning! (((Tissues)))
*sigh*
this is soooo lovely and now in my library!!
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Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
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2005-07-20
12:59 PM
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Wow I swore I posted to this one oh well\
Nice opoem!
-JujuJuju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic
The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;
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Mysteria
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
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2005-07-20
01:22 PM
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Ahhhhhhhhhh!
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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posted
2005-07-20
05:27 PM
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Goodness, I do love your writing!! This was such a beautiful love poem-story. And I am such a hopless (and in love) romantic!! Hugs,
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