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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-07-20 07:29 AM

I Slipped

Today I’ve slipped the bars of wean
And walked within a gardens scene
And wondered at the palettes lush
The sky above and field of brush

Each footstep placed upon the floor
Filled me with vivacious awe
Left my mouth a whoosh of sigh
The gold and azure of the sky

And flowers spoke of magic bloom
With gentle odors of consume
Lacing me within the art
And making me a living part

Its there I touched a moments light
That took away the dark of night
And placed me on a throne of grace
A king within a common space

Then once again I felt the bars
But this time the bars were stars

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2005-07-20 07:37 AM

A most beautiful garden to remind one of his own humanity and the fleeting privilige of experiencing life on this planet ... Stars' bars are better than metal and drink...

-MVS

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-07-20 07:59 AM

See More...your worldly eyes, warm the hearts of all who read you....enjoyed this emmensly

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-07-20 08:19 AM

o to be a star in the bar of your blue heaven

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

4 posted 2005-07-20 08:21 AM

nicely written

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-07-20 09:05 AM

A most beautiful morning read Sy!
I'm off and running to take on the day.

&

~ Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2005-07-20 10:36 AM

The magic of your words opens the vision of our eyes to share a beauty undefined...Magnificent writing...*big hugs*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2005-07-20 03:00 PM

But this time the bars were stars
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
thats because your rhymes are heaven.

Each footstep placed upon the floor
Filled me with vivacious awe
Left my mouth a whoosh of sigh
The gold and azure of the sky

yer so cool the stars winkie just for you.

*L*

*ww*

Thank you clarity ... thank you frailty
Thank you consequence ...
Thank you ... thank you silence ...

Alanis

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2005-07-20 06:28 PM

Everytime I read you I find myself wishing I could go for a walk with you.

And nodding, I know I have said it before, but everytime I read you, I realize that I just did.

Your poetry is like...that first cool front, when all the flowers are still bragging summer, but the weather is fine, so fine.

Yeah, you are like that.

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