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The Blood Of Life
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The Blood Of Life |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA 
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The Blood Of Life She was born from the fortunate womb of mother earth. It was the day when loves inevitable assault struck my heart with a piercing arrow. Where cupids hands veiled in flames, first strung up his bow. She is the breath of life, the breath I inhale, the air I hold in and never breathe out. The greatest good of this world is the greatest good to come. Bound with a greater chain of beauty. I shall come for hire before her like a celestial dove, perched upon the branches of heaven. To hold her close in loves sweet nest. I among her am the immortal pilot of the sun. Where here eyes are the passageway of steady rays filtered through the windows of my impassioned soul. Where every fallen angel who only bares one wing she takes up in arms and lifts them toward the sky. Her loveliness is but the beginning where the beginning has no end and her loveliness is perfection. She is of infinite providence, God sent in an image of a mortal woman. But yet in the form of a venerable spirit. Author (C) Kevin Brian Wright |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Her loveliness is but the beginning where the beginning has no end and her loveliness is perfection" how beautiful!  |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you, i'm happy you enjoyed the read. Very much appreaciated! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like your style. I swear if a decent guy would say that to me I would melt Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very enjoyable Please give us more! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you for your comments |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have an interesting way of writing, and your words of love are beautiful. I know I'm late, but welcome to Passions! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
thank you very much!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, indeed, enjoyed the classical overtones of this very much...lovely visions of the first woman...without her, we would not be...enjoyed and pen on! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you for your thoughts on my piece, I very much appreaciate it...! |
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