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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Dishevelled baren tired you became a home to me Empty peaceful tired smiling vision seeing all and knowing all Halfway between woman and nature Halfway between knowledge and understanding Halfway between something of death and life Standing as the sun set behind you Smiling as dawn would surround you In this Place of surround |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bodger Interesting read, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks Bodger |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such affectionate tribute! Nicely done. TD |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
TD Thanks Bodger |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the sound of this when read aloud. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this alot! Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
just beautiful....  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the surround sound of adoration, has been placed to vividly on these blue pages...lovely write. |
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