Open Poetry #36 |
Brick-by_Brick |
PazSqual Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 71 |
Brick-by-Brick Some time ago I came across an ailing heart It was protecting itself behind a brick wall, A wall it had painstakingly put up Brick-by-Brick Un-trusting and hurt, it was unable to feel With caring words, respect and a little tenderness one by one the bricks came down, allowing me to touch it, if only for a while Free from its confines, room to breath It regained its trust; I saw it take off in free flight Another heart touched it, as I gave it time to heal The bricks from the wall I didn’t discard I saved them in case they were needed As it turns out, I need them myself I have opened up my heart one too many times The first time I thought it was for a lifetime But that wasn’t meant to be The second, and last time was to this ailing heart But I was there to set it free Now the bricks will encase my own heart Not that it is un-trusting It just hurts so much When the special ones I let in, Leave [This message has been edited by PazSqual (07-04-2005 07:19 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How tenderly you allow a look beyond this wall...subtle is the key, that only those with true sensitivity would find the gate. There is purpose in these walls, although just as we build them, so too can we let them down. Hugs, TD |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
this doesn't deserve to be hidden in the back pages ..... it is an awesome and honest write. .. have a few bricks of my own, we all do! * Ct |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem touches the heart deeply for I too recognize the bricks and their use...for many it remains a wall that cannot be breached but today I have built a door to let a few souls in to share the garden of my heart with me...I hope that someday you will remove the bricks so that others may share the heart of someone whose words touch many....*big hugs* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
PazSqual, An extraordinary write. Perhaps not now, but I have a feeling that someone or something will remove those bricks one by one. (Sure could identify with this... Glad someone tore down my wall...) miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PazSqual Alas, alas, I use bricks of glass. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
talk about a pounding heart beat... this heart write pushed itself past all the bricks |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I do understand.....perhaps, why I tend to drift to solitude. ....jo |
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