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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
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0 posted 2005-12-09 07:46 AM


For You

Your radiance astounds me,
each day, one in paradise.
Your eyes speak truth,
audible for miles.
Your tongue utters beautiful syllables,
bringing a smile to my ears.
Your hand entwined in mine,
brings a rush of youth through my body,
my worries, my fears, fade away,
I am born anew.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-12-09 08:15 AM



Your name is intriguing, and I wonder
if you intend entendre meanings in your
beautiful poetry?  Or does it just refer
to you, and your ability to understand
past agreements or actions?

Either way...

beautiful name...lovely poetry!

.

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2 posted 2005-12-09 06:47 PM


"Your eyes speak truth,
audible for miles"

beautiful!

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-12-09 07:02 PM


A lovely entrance.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

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