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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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hypostases sparkles of satire, in clean fun ace-doubled, the trespasser on my back nebula alerts, projecting challenging worlds flashing swords above the night minds unleashing, new tales of space & time like women on fire with green eyes dancing loosely on my heart eating up bad parts, that crinkled chill spitting out, puffs of old energy tilled a rivaled early spring, gently presses songbirds in clear view…sights, sound and smell pitching above rolling valleys with hills like a lion with squirrel-hawk eyes pointing north to human life like a spring morning, greedy for gold towering far higher then i’d seen before wishing for young hunters of stone buildings where a holy man rocks his hidden daughter to the sounds of great distance & family he teems with silver fish…like a large fireplace on the feast night of his birth, smiling dreamy betrothed, to spoon feeding conversations into the minds of poor dead people dreaming my genes in metaphoric years despite what was written, with solid oak spears wearing bushy white brows, of entire populations who think about familiar forests, once in a while but can’t remember their true feeling of home his journey speaks in the night telling of travelers rising from behind the sun secrets finding routes where rivers run uphill… to avoid the coldness of learning letters written from the blood of evil debtors and those who came and died before i thought about 3 trees, that grew and stood the test of time, supported by a buttress of well rounded towers, guarded with solders & red crosses, and how they lost their balance while looking inside, the descent of all things invisible where the throne of powers organize dominion in the spirit world of wings and rightful places like a pre-incarnate sight, outside the realm of natural cause, incomprehensible depth beyond where i may go, but will someday live where presence, lay hidden in a magik mirror awaiting reflection, which now falls short of imagination, implicit stimulating sugar thoughts, circulating deity unique & free from any heathen vulgarity emphasized by earthly priests of dogma speculation seized and so to to the intrinsic of nature there in, lies divine essence three fold suggestion of white bird |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your words always, always amaze me Lee but this part here ----------------------------------- minds unleashing, new tales of space & time like women on fire with green eyes dancing loosely on my heart eating up bad parts, that crinkled chill spitting out, puffs of old energy tilled now, I Know you wrote that part about me right...lol...I adored this, and the green eyes dancing loosely... made these green eyes smile for sure!! strange how a laugh looks like crying without the tears {queenryche} |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling... sorry it took so long for me to get here, but I wanted to make sure I knew what hypostases meant, so I looked it up. I'm very glad that I did, because as I read, I thought, each one of these stanzas could stand alone as a singular poem and yet they connect to form a satisfying whole. Then I thought that it reminded me of biblical visions, a personal book of revelations, so yep, hypostases, indeed!  and should I play the favorite line game (always difficult with you as there are always many) but this one shall reverberate with me awhile: "wishing for young hunters of stone buildings where a holy man rocks his hidden daughter" Sometimes I think you trance channel poetry! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
before I read I have to look this up, hypostases brb *smile* ( OMG I didnt read what Karen wrote . . . *laughing here* be back Lee, have to get my son) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ What a timely writing! And yes, I looked up that word too. You are amazing and this is so deeply the inside out of you and yes, you are beautiful!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok, sorry bout that . . . I love to go searching, always learning . . . I saw in this all of the states, kind of like, from the view of the philosopher, nature and the human. You took me through ports here and landed me right back to the beginning. It made me think of the Trinity also, but I think I am more along the lines of Plotinus. But you gave me much to feast on here, Lee and I thank you for that. How you do that, I do not know, but am grateful. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“dreaming my genes in metaphoric years despite what was written, with solid oak spears wearing bushy white brows, of entire populations who think about familiar forests, once in a while but can’t remember their true feeling of home” You had me at “hypostases”, but this verse jumps off the page and hits right between the eyes. You have a beautiful talent for poetry, and philosophy, Lee J. JL |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You weave spiritual beauty in a way that feeds both the heart and soul...A delight to read...**big hugs** |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LeeJ, you have woven a very complex tapestry here and I am reading it again. So deep. So far, I have to agree with all the comments above. Certainly cannot pick out a favorite verse...they are all so impeccably perfect! Library clicked. ....jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Okay lee, you know I am lost again..I am but a dot along the lines. LOL martyjo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Envy and Awe....two words that come to mind. Well done LeeJ.. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
amazing, your simply amazing merry xmas lee My spirit will rise |
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