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Enormity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Enormity Enormity has veiled my eye To watch the speed of light to fly I cannot breach the outer reach My mind is stranded here this beach And though I use dreams after burn I cannot learn what I must learn And fizzle to a phantoms sigh The understanding of the die But spirits will not still the quill A formula to fill the bill And on the calculations go To over take the under tow I see the writing on the wall For shadows grow for me too tall And all my senses seem to fade Into a white where lies no shade? They fade into horizons blend There just beyond where lies the end |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, my friend, and I'm smiling wide....you definately know it's there, but the comprehension is way to diverse, to distant for my cup of tea...but it's fun in the knowing and feeling of it, isn't it. Good morning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the enormity of what is out there is mind boggling Sey. Loved this deeply perspective write this morning sir. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The visions you weave will never fad for their colors brighten the heavens of our lives leaving us in awe at the beauty of them splashing across the skies much like the awe we feel when viewing the northern lights....Wonderful to read your words this morning....**big hugs** |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And though I use dreams after burn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and that will be the coolest personifi I read today... dreams after burn I just love all that encompasses... the things you perceive and then turn into poetry just blows me mothy mind.   *ww*   Thru the water...thru the rain |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Let that quill continue to ink words Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
"spirits will not still the quill" forever speaking through the pen times of now and way back then  merry meet my friend My spirit will rise |
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