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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-12-03 09:15 AM

Loves Jackknife

I jackknifed from a sky above
Straight into a sea of love
And held my breath in hearts believe
To take the hand of loves receive

She led me to a field of green
A weeping willow graced the scene
And there I stood with flowing fern
To hear the things of loves concern

She whispered in a singsong voice
The in and out of lovers choice
The matrix of the balance bar
And pointed out the northern star

It’s when the harps did cease in plight
And passage out the end of night
The evening lost the shades of store
And I was led back home once more

To face this life the thorn of morn
And breakfast of the true of dawn

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-12-03 09:25 AM

Good morning Seymour.

And, this is a lovely first read for me today.
Hope all is well with you.

&

, Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-12-03 10:33 AM

Mornin' Seymour - thankyou for this lovely Saturday gift. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-12-03 03:52 PM

Seymour~
If your dawn was as lovely as mine ... you had quite the breakfast word-feast~

Thank you, dear poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2005-12-03 04:03 PM

What whispered words of wisdom are found in you this day. True love does take us away and then returns in the everyday. Excellent use of rhyme.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2005-12-03 04:22 PM

Truly enjoyed today's write Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2005-12-03 05:23 PM

Nancy
Good morning sweet.

Chris,
Hugs back dear.

Marge,
Good morning love.

Kethry
Excellent reply.

scorpio
Thank you for the read and reply.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-12-03 07:19 PM

Dreams are an excellent lullaby
they lift you far into the sky,
where the harps are golden pure...
and love is true as love is sure...

See what you do to me?

.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2005-12-03 07:24 PM

Sunshine
You are a delight.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-12-12 10:27 PM

good evening sir

just trying to catch up with all i have missed. and it fills my soul with such joy and warmth to carry on for an eternity

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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