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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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winter wears her long shirt dawn in white wool she could be the trees at a mountain hem but she is the ice song that strums from teuton's mouths perhaps the vikings know her northerns they are there in long ships at the bay they are children's corks floating but they wear their wooden shields like rows of unbuttoned eyes that search the morrow's morning to know the hollow of her ribs when she is odinary in her chanting ____________ daark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You do evoke the loveliest reveries for me. I love when you write like this, DS. Methinks you hide your tenders deep, and I confess, I find that intriguing.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene one.. intrigue is such a lovely word when you suggest it.... there was/is a tender depth that only needs one to touch it to have it become visible thank you for the whisper |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One has to read carefully and understand with sensitivity that you really never misspell anything... cante away... . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine odinarily not (grin) thanks lady friend |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
and her chants are of long, slow-remembering warmth . . . - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved the 'unbottoned eyes' reference a powerfully good write, DS make no mistake about it, you are a mighty fine dreamer |
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