Open Poetry #36 |
An Ghaoth Aneas |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
For don’t you see . . . We can go To our secret place Anytime we want There By the lake With the sun stars And moon silently looking on We can walk stand Or lie by each other’s side And who’s to say Be it from reason wisdom or enmity That such things should not be done Cast out of Eden Even God Allowed Eve and Adam The solace of their dreams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for this, John. It's beautiful in its simplicity. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The solace of their dreams" says it all. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
pome of a teen. still very good! |
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