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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-12-04 01:21 PM


White snow
On evergreen
Beneath a pale blue sky

Rubber boots
Woolen mittens
The whole wide world
A neighborhood
No more than two blocks long

And where is that girl
With the shining hair
Who had us all so enthralled

Noble castles on a hill
Those faithful dogs
Who loved the cold
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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2005-12-04 01:43 PM

i wish i was there... great work. !
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-20 10:32 PM

so very good. a real poem.
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