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I Suffered The Consequence
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I Suffered The Consequence |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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I Suffered The Consequence In knowing that I giving all Realised it was a mistake I suffered the consequence That has led to heart break Yes I continued holding on Always hoped it would last I suffered the consequence From pleasures in the past Still another chapter in life Gave love to who I believed I suffered the consequence Of my heart being deceived All the years I had enjoyed Still wanting love to extend I suffered the consequence They ignored me in the end Hope ©2005 Link below to the poem with music and graphic below http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_798388.html |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well Hope, I just never believe anything until I have it/see it/feel it in real... it's good advice~~~believe me  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yanno, this made me think of myself, and how, at one time, I so compromised because I wanted so to be loved...made me think of the unrealistic and irresponsible choices I made...and the men I chose, who were not able nor mature enough to stay true to themselves, let alone me. Hugs to you Hope, and thank you for sharing this. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I gotta ditto what Lee said, but it made me think of, yeah, I suffered the consequences, but didn't I sort of invite them too... To thine ownself be true.. and if you are not.. you get what you asked for.. lol.. Seriously, though I just want to say that not only did I enjoy the write, I truly enjoyed the music and other from your link... thanks for sharing!!! Pepper |
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