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roads of ebron |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I never regret the time we had that was uneven like the roads of ebron when the monsoons wash them and they are ragged hems at the edge of a pale summer we were worshipers there pilgrims on journey boats with the long oar prayers dipping smooth psalms deep into a worthy religion without a sacrificial symbol on either side of perfection and our sin was small talk that kept love smothered but there was healing too by the forgiven gallons on every corner of our moments free for the taking and we bathed our fill even til dawn some evenings we were the silver swans that sunsets whispered of we made furrows in the pools that were healed by our laughter ________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah... I needed a  this very day!  "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "on either side of perfection and our sin was small talk that kept love smothered but there was healing too by the forgiven gallons on every corner of our moments" and "healed by our laughter" Wonderful, you! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
damn, that's niiiice, darkie~ good to find your spills~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"dipping smooth psalms deep into a worthy religion without a sacrificial symbol" Awesome! and that last stanza......wish I could write like that! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, pretty she is -- and you draw her well. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the beauty of this swan song |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Every word of this is like a drop of water caught in the light of the moon. My favourite parts are: "and they are ragged hems at the edge of a pale summer" and "dipping smooth psalms" and "we were the silver swans that sunsets whispered of we made furrows in the pools that were healed by our laughter" If you hadn't travelled the roads of ebron, we wouldn't have had this moon-drop poem. - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your life journeys have brought to us many beautiful visions Dark~ I enjoyed this one muchly~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
on either side of perfection and our sin was small talk that kept love smothered but there was healing too by the forgiven gallons on every corner of our moments and we silently mouthed love words to the saint stained sky crossing some imagry line staggering like elegant innocence in a neatly encased sleeve of roused Cheshire eyes blooming amdist the language of heaven...scribed into blameless hereafter OHHHH, now look what you've inspired you write without compromise...knowing the confidential friend of eternity's drawing room. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
every time i come back to feel your words~ your words touch me~ you really are special  My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
family pip..thanks to all of you for the read and review, you each bless me with your touch and each of you do it in a different way, Thank you greatly |
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