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Yogi
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since 2001-11-05
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0 posted 2005-11-30 07:29 PM



Just want to say these words
All I want is to love
To experience being loved
Everyday without love for me
Is like a book without pages
For my chapters are empty

There are no words on love to write
Plenty on the love of hurt and pain
Fists, kicks, even knifes have been used
To me this was love
The love of Satan who killed my heart
Stole my young soul forever

So what is real love like?
I shall never experience this feeling
For my father has told me
You will never have love I will make sure of this
For in life he has won
In death he is still winning

So tell me what love all about is


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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
1 posted 2005-12-01 10:37 AM


I see no one else has touched this one.. and perhaps because of the line about Satan stealing your soul and it being lost forever.. or your father killing love.. I do not know.. it's kind of dark for sure...

Do you really believe your soul is lost to Satan?  It surely does not have to be.. it cannot be lost.. only you can surrender your soul, Satan cannot have it.. it belongs to only you and you can give it where it belongs.. if you want love.. then love God.. or love all of us.. for that is where love truly is.. and love is the most powerful gift of all.. with love can come hurt and loss, but never a loss that you will not remember the love... life is not hopeless unless WE.. YOU.. make it so... the hand is there, reaching out for you.. a hand of love..

all you have to do is take that hand.  

Not preaching, simply speaking from the heart...

That is love.

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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