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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-11-30 04:57 PM


Love dances quietly upon
the fronds when the gaze
lingers before the swell and
time dwells lightly upon
the gasp of moistened lips

Artfully painting a pout,  
a quiver, the pursing of one
upon the openness of another.
The tender joining of that which
brings to rise the firmness of
budding flesh.

And as each ember rises into
the stream of heated breath, two
shall touch lightly, press softly
into the arch of human form,
hungering for that which only
man and woman can feel and
so easily understand in silence
as the waltz plays on....into
crystal eternity.



© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-30 05:23 PM



the gap between
the gasp
and the press

is but a prelude
to eternity...

Loved this, Magnus.

CG

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2 posted 2005-11-30 05:31 PM


May your waltz never end, Dear Barry!

You hit the bell top of the sigh meter with this poem of love 'n lust! Me likey!


Linda

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3 posted 2005-11-30 09:45 PM


Magnus~
For reasons that only I would understand at the moment.... trust me .... I adore this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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4 posted 2005-11-30 09:51 PM


Oh my goodness! This is just beautiful.
Well done indeed my friend. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-11-30 10:01 PM


*SIGH*

~Dance me to the end of love...dance me~

.

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

iliana
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6 posted 2005-12-01 12:50 PM


I have this lovely Indonesian batik fan....and I am using it!  This sizzles, BJ!   .....jo
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7 posted 2005-12-01 12:50 PM


Hey Barry


And as each ember rises into
the stream of heated breath, two
shall touch lightly, press softly
into the arch of human form,
hungering for that which only
man and woman can feel and
so easily understand in silence
as the waltz plays on....into
crystal eternity.


whoa....
and a mighty high ho silver!!!!!

loved this

garysgirl
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8 posted 2005-12-01 01:25 PM


Whew!! I do love this kind of
dancing, Barry!!!

Ummm, it's warm in here.
Hugs,
Ethel

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