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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2005-11-30 02:58 PM

I am a shadow in the dark.
Don't look -
a victim who still bears the mark.
Don't look.
I am a whisper in the wind.
Don't look -
a sinner caught, who never sinned.
Don't look.
I am a shipwreck far from land.
Don't look –
you see it in my shaking hand
don't look.
My scars reveal the hurt of me.
Don't look.
But only you can set me free –
Don't look. Don't look away!

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-11-30 03:09 PM

wull, I'm looking and I like what I see, very well done.....

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2005-11-30 03:31 PM

I couldn't resist. And I'm glad I did look!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-11-30 03:33 PM

Excellent write Kethry!
Hugs, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-11-30 09:42 PM

Kethry~
What a treasured treat this is .... how wonderful it is to have you here sharing~

I like this one bunches~

Warm Florida *HUGLETS* to you my friend~
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-12-01 12:43 PM

I love poems with surprise endings! This one got me! Good job.

...jo

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-12-01 03:42 AM

awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

7 posted 2005-12-01 10:33 AM

This is so true, and how well you do it the drawing in and then the meaning coming so clear... as always.. truly, as always.

Don't look away and please, please don't pull away... that's what I'd like to say, because I think that too much pain makes people pull away sometimes.. cannot take it? Do not know what to do? or simply... too exhausting...?

Anyway, thank you so much for posting this so that I could find it and read it today.. and perhaps tomorrow and another day and another... strange how sometimes words on a page simply can help your heart .. not heal, but stop bleeding so hard.. if only for a little while.

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-12-01 01:03 PM

Amen, my friend... amen!!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2005-12-01 01:21 PM

Yeppers. that's how it is sometimes, we
don't want them to look....away, that is.
Hugs,
Ethel

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