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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2005-11-30 03:40 PM


I have thought to myself

perhaps,

it is the way
that I perceived you
as the strong
silent type
that caused this uneasy
sort of distress
every time you come near

or is it this commanding presence
you seem to have
that makes me turn my head
to divert my eyes
every time
our paths cross

do my eyes lie?

Yes, I have pondered this
and given a thought or two

{it's nothing you say
or nothing that you do}

but for a few seconds
a spark seemed to flash
the day your hand brushed against me
as you walked past...

so? Maybe it's just my creative mind,
oh...

if I looked deeper, what might I find,

but I still can't greet you

eye to eye

I'm afraid a blush
surely would arise,
if I were to ever look
into those deep brown eyes..

I'm better off keeping my perceptions
to myself...

I've heard it said
have no fear

but, I'm always distressed
every time that your near.




live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-11-30 03:44 PM


"if I looked deeper, what might I find,
but I still can't greet you

eye to eye

I'm afraid a blush
surely would arise,
if I were to ever look
into those brown eyes.."

Excellent write here Donna..
I know the feeling of blushing whenever you look at that someone special.

Love ya lady~

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

CastleGuard
Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2005-11-30 05:21 PM



strong and silent type...
but a cover
for fear of looking
into her deep blue eyes
and having to let go
of his shield...

Felt...from the 'other' side...

CG

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