Open Poetry #36 |
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A Puff Among The Stars |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
moment by moment, layer by layer, memories condense onto the berg of time; these pure crystals of our presence, distilled into the hazy green... such is our ethereal existence, for we are but vapour among stars, a whiff a consciousness flickering for a brief moment on the stage of our benevolent cosmic progenitors but even they, for all their terrible power and fiery hearts, have found a delicate balance; even they, these lumbering giants, have found a peace in their fragile co-existence... so that WE may BE.... so why can’t we? or is death truly the price of consciousness... CG |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
it's a delicate balance in the dance of life and death we are but a moment of pirouette |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
CG, this is a wonderful write! And, a good question. ![]() |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Life and death, to love or not to love... the answer..is yes. ~ARh "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your vapour is quite profound. ![]() Ye BE ~ and ye SEE. ![]() A delightfully cosmic write, dear Philosophizing Poet! Warm hug on a cold day, EA ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am truly enjoying your poetry *smiling* a special way you have with words. live for today, |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CG~ Just wonderful is this !! *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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