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Enchantress
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0 posted 2005-11-30 12:36 PM





Skeleton branches


     against an aging sky


           shivering


                  in the wind


                       as November waves


                                Good-bye.


.

© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Waterfall27
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1 posted 2005-11-30 01:24 PM


Very pretty
Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-11-30 01:26 PM



Excellent, Enchantress!
This fulfills us both visually,
and emotionally!

.

scorpio
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3 posted 2005-11-30 01:32 PM


This is beautiful in it's simplicity Tinker!!  Let's hope December is kinder to us!!

believe in what your heart feels...

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-11-30 01:59 PM


this gave such a resonating mood, deep within the soul...enjoy these moments and your deeply inspired middle eye.  smiles and hugs
arthur
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5 posted 2005-11-30 02:01 PM


thoughts and prayers
love
Michael
aka -arthur

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2005-11-30 03:34 PM


So very beautiful.  Ta-ta November!!!!
Kethry
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7 posted 2005-11-30 03:40 PM


Yanno, I never thought of November (or any month) waving. Now I doubt I'll be able to think of it in any other way. Excellent words here.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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8 posted 2005-11-30 03:47 PM


beautiful
Nightshade
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9 posted 2005-11-30 04:38 PM


Excellent penning Teed.
Love this.
Hugs & Miss Ya!!

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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10 posted 2005-11-30 04:46 PM


and once again November slips into the cold of December...

your words warm the soul with beauty Nancy.

Enjoyed this much.

Martie
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11 posted 2005-11-30 04:57 PM


Nancy

And it happens so quickly....!  How beautifully you write the ending!  

Goodknight
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12 posted 2005-11-30 05:21 PM


it goes so fast doesn't it?  Lovely poem - Paul
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13 posted 2005-11-30 05:44 PM


Very effectively displayed!

Bye, bye, November! See you next year!

Welcoming in December!

A lovely post, Nancy!


Linda

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14 posted 2005-11-30 06:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo pretty, sweet friend, I just love it when so few words can create such beauty and fingerpaint such precious pictures and yours always do just that, yay! (smiles) Bless you, sweet friend, this is soooooo pretty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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15 posted 2005-11-30 06:55 PM


I do believe you are right Nance,  November
has said it's goodbyes...and now winter sits
on your doorstep.

Enchantress
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16 posted 2005-11-30 10:07 PM


Ahhh thank you all ever so much for your replies.
This is one November I am pleased to see leave.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

kayjay
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17 posted 2005-12-01 12:57 PM


November does seem to be one of the longest months.  This is a beautiful poem and pix.  Hugs Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

iliana
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18 posted 2005-12-01 01:16 AM


NancyLee, you are SO GOOD at capturing a moment for eternity!   ....jo
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