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postscript-Tomorrow’s Grace
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postscript-Tomorrow’s Grace |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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Against drawn shutters tomorrow’s Grace appeared as if in vain; huddled small and set to suffer, she extended little gratitude for its warmth and light. But illumination refused to leave her situation. The Light searched its way inside through a fault in her enclosure. Her anguish now caught out in the open circumspectly advised that someone surely need take possession of the situation. In answer, she exited self compression, and in the new light of day, soon found a craving for further elucidation. Out of blame’s grip she took accountability for her actions and apprehensively decided to shoulder it. Standing tall and straight despite the new encumbrance, and though freed by Grace to do so, her lips did not immediately curve upwards- the gravity of her past deeds held them down. Ownership is as weighty as one thinks it to be. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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I loved the way you wrote this! "Ownership is as weighty as one thinks it to be." How true! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
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thank you martie, it seems old age doesn't save you from maturity *s*, for I am learning lessons I should have learned years ago |
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Martie
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I know what you mean! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Out of blame’s grip she took accountability for her actions and apprehensively decided to shoulder it. Standing tall and straight despite the new encumbrance, and though freed by Grace to do so, her lips did not immediately curve upwards- the gravity of her past deeds held them down. But remember... Another has claimed those deeds, paid in full and stamped "forgiven" across any invoices for payment due... So the curve will come... even if we can't now see it happening. *S* |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
suthern, yes, I left that part out, for this is the humanity side of Grace, the part that fights to keep control...and oh yes if not forgiven, I would not be here and writing....thank you so much for your comments  |
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