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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2005-11-27 07:29 PM

Coldest Night Of The Winter
By: Noah Eaton
11/27/05

In my most desperate moments I wonder,
how you're feeling as I speak,
are you able to keep a straight face on your own,
or do you weep before you fall asleep?
Do you yearn for my company,
as much as I've coped for you,
baby, I hope you're keeping yourself active,
to get over these lovesick blues.

And if you've played down all my faults,
you can build yourself a castle,
and if you're co-writing this monologue,
can you recognize my worldwide attachment signal?

HOW DO YOU COPE,
with all your desires,
on the coldest night of the winter,
are they so intense they make you cry?
YOU MAKE ME FREEZE,
but I'm forgiving,
cuz no one said it would be easy,
and I feel I'm too the source of your bleeding,
what's mine is yours,
what's yours is mine...

Well, when you feel lonely,
do you like to walk into your garage,
just to read your amnesty aloud,
reverberate your terminal sigh montage,
and do you feel stupid performing,
or as proud as a chanticleer,
and when you sleep are your arms outstretched,
or are you relaxed on your side, my dear.

And if you've played down all my faults,
you can build yourself a castle,
and if you're ghostwriting this monologue,
can you recognize my worldwide attachment signal?

HOW DO YOU COPE,
with all your desires,
on the coldest night of the winter,
are they so intense they make you cry?
YOU MAKE ME FREEZE,
but I'm forgiving,
cuz no one said it would be easy,
and I feel I'm too the source of your bleeding,
what's mine is yours,
what's yours is mine...

Hanging by a common thread,
it's just another fine we tread,
fate hot-wiring us for destiny,
playing with our hearts and our heads.
Hanging by a common thread,
it's just another fine we tread,
fate hot-wiring us for destiny,
playing with our hearts and our heads...

...WHEN GLORIFYING YOU,
IT CAN HURT JUST TO SPEAK...
.
.
.
HOW DO YOU COPE,
with all your desires,
on the coldest night of the winter,
are they so intense they make you cry?
YOU MAKE ME FREEZE,
but I'm forgiving,
cuz no one said it would be easy,
and I feel I'm too the source of your bleeding,
what's mine is yours,
what's yours is mine...

HOW DO YOU COPE,
with all your desires,
on the coldest night of the winter,
are they so intense they make you cry?
YOU MAKE ME FREEZE,
but I'm forgiving,
cuz no one said it would be easy,
and I feel I'm too the source of your bleeding,
what's mine is yours,
what's yours is mine...

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

1 posted 2005-11-27 07:53 PM

All I can say is you're incredible, Noah.  You abound with talents.

   God bless

    Rae

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-11-27 08:02 PM

Powerful piece indeed my friend.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-11-27 11:11 PM

This is one heavy duty write Noah. Alot must be on your mind lately. Be well and happy my friend. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

lofreq
Junior Member

since 2005-11-26

Posts 11
Pa

4 posted 2005-11-28 12:53 PM

Very nice poem! i enjoyed it....hope you dont mind a "newbie" commenting.......

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2005-11-28 01:52 AM

I love the line "fate hot wiring us together". If you're going to be hot wired at least do it on the coldest night of winter *G. Oh you already did. There is greatness in this song. I love it!

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-11-28 02:11 AM

Noah, my friend. She is coping because she knows you exist. I believe this. You write your heart here and I understand. Hugs to you, Angel! lily jo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2005-11-28 05:05 AM

Noah, this is a very good write. I know
the feeling a lot of times, and this is
one of those times. I'm missing my honey
very much tonight....this morning.
Hugs,
Ethel

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

8 posted 2005-11-28 08:44 AM

You are an incredible writer and you wear your heart on your sleeve.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-11-28 11:22 PM

Enjoyed...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2005-11-30 05:41 PM

Noah, you are an angelic vessel of love.

The burning and yearning for your dream girl, makes for very touching poetry and songs! ~ But I can only imagine what they will be like when she finally does enter your life! Wowie! Zowie! lol

Loveya!
Linda

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