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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2005-11-28 10:38 AM


she of golden heart
we all know her as Sunshine
radiating love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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1 posted 2005-11-28 10:50 AM


And that she does!
IT IS SOOOOO GOOD TO SEE YOU AGAIN!
Sorry I shouted..I got so excited.
& ...and please stay awhile!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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2 posted 2005-11-28 11:05 AM


Yeppers! You captured the rays of our Sun!

Good to see you! Hope you'll be staying awhile!


Linda

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3 posted 2005-11-28 11:16 AM


Oh, yes!  Absolutely perfect!   ....jo
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4 posted 2005-11-28 11:27 AM


That's our Sunshine!
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5 posted 2005-11-28 11:34 AM


Bingo! *S*
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6 posted 2005-11-28 11:47 AM


She certainly does mean well to all for sure!  She will treasure this and Interloper it's sure great reading you again.
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just out of reach
7 posted 2005-11-28 01:07 PM


You got that right Interloper!

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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8 posted 2005-11-28 01:54 PM


throwing you a golden kiss
thanking you, for sharing your warm heartbeat

~happy trails to you~

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9 posted 2005-11-28 03:06 PM


yup, that's karilea spot on
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10 posted 2005-11-28 03:11 PM


Indeed she is....

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11 posted 2005-12-11 09:57 AM



I know she's smiling at this one...



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12 posted 2005-12-11 09:58 AM


4 Sure!

  misce

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13 posted 2005-12-11 10:08 AM


4 definate!  
littlewing
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14 posted 2005-12-11 11:24 AM


and just this made me smile, thank you - both of you!
Startime55
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15 posted 2005-12-11 11:25 AM


BRAVO!!! How true it is and your words have capture a sunbeam of her heart....**big hugs**
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16 posted 2005-12-11 06:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a most beautiful senryu that shines like sunshine, dearest friend, I'm sure Karilea will forever treasure this golde gem, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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17 posted 2005-12-11 06:29 PM



Noah called it perfectly....

a golde gem.

Thank you, Sir.

I am honored.

.

LeeJ
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18 posted 2005-12-12 10:20 AM


apty put, and a more suited word to describe her could not be a better fit then Sunshine....
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19 posted 2005-12-12 12:04 PM


She is a ray of light and hope, shining through!!
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

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