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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-26 08:15 AM


There are Moments

There are moments when I disengage
The script upon the written page
To choose a fantasy of pleasure
To feel and touch a phantom treasure

It has no tangible exist
But lies within a frame persist
It is a field of shelter zones
A place where I may rest my bones

But more than bones enjoy the break
It sooths my mind of over take
It stays the acid of dismay
That eats the time of day away

It is an act of mental fly
It is a rainbow in the sky
A butterfly draining nectar
The privy of a private sector

And I have tied this end to end
To reach around the rivers bend


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Angelheart
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1 posted 2005-11-26 08:26 AM


nice write, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-11-26 08:34 AM



Keep those circles of love
lightly bound...
for it is then those butterflies
come 'round...

Isn't that right sigh, er, Sy?



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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-11-26 12:37 PM



Hello, Mr. T.!

"There are moments when I disengage
The script upon the written page
To choose a fantasy of pleasure
To feel and touch a phantom treasure"

~ and that, my dear sonneteering friend, will keep you forever young!

Loveyamuchly!
EA

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4 posted 2005-11-26 12:39 PM


around the rivers bend am I
grateful for these words of sy



It's so good to be home.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-11-26 01:41 PM


Angelheart
You keep up the replies and I'll do as you ask.

Sunshine
I'll try.

Earth Angel
Are you sure about that. LOL

serenity  
So glad you are home.

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6 posted 2005-11-26 04:56 PM


Seymour~
You just plain rock, sir~

I am always drawn to your 'moments'~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Enchantress
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7 posted 2005-11-26 05:04 PM


Ah dear Sy...
this is perfectly lovely!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-11-26 06:03 PM


Marge,
Thank you dear.

Nancy,
You are a love.

iliana
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9 posted 2005-11-26 11:42 PM


It helps me, too, Sy, to make it around the twists and turns.  Much enjoyed.  *hugs*....jo
Honeybunch
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10 posted 2005-11-27 01:35 AM


"There are moments when I disengage
The script upon the written page
To choose a fantasy of pleasure
To feel and touch a phantom treasure"

I do believe there is a need for this in life today.  I find your words quite thought provoking and meaningful for me today.  Thank you. ~~ Helen

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-11-27 09:35 AM


iliana
Thank you for the read and enjoy.

Helen
Well it works for me, thank you dear.

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