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Open Poetry #36

Aaron

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-11-23 08:18 PM

Even if
As her father said
A narrow board
With a hole in it
Yet in her stunted innocence
She is more than all of Warsaw
Glibly waltzing on the promenade
In silks and furs

It is that actual trust in love
Even mine after so many years
That draws me back to Krochmalna Street

Though Poland is plagued
From within and without
With evils that threaten to shorten
Our already precarious hour

Here I’ll stay as long as I can
Beside this simple girl who still only prays
I’ll be the mensch I planned upon
When together
We were young

andy04
Junior Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 22
New South Wales

1 posted 2005-11-23 10:20 PM

another great poem
it is very nice.

andy04

the simplest thing in life is love
the difficult thing in life
is finding your true love!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-20 11:16 PM

beautiful love poem rarely seen from you.

beautiful.

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