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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Out On the back steps Beyond the bins Full of garbage— The autumn leaves Trembling |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes... they tremble in anticipation of the gaping black bag. Thank you, John. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Awaiting a history Just beginning Dave |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Yes, they tremble because they know they should be composted! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
They're trembling because they are in the wrong bags!! At least in Ontario Canada ... clear bags only!! lol. This is great John. Much enjoyed. Chris |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Big pictures from tiny words...there's a name for that, I think.... ...oh yeah, "poetry"...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how the poem is balanced the positive.... 1.out 2.beyond 3.The autumn leaves(bright color) the negative... 1. back, 2. bins Full of garbage bin 3. Trembling it is beautiful. |
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