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Open Poetry #36

Broken In Need Of Repair

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-11-22 09:56 AM

Broken In Need Of Repair

I will ask you once again
If you are still there
You had left a heart here
It is in need of repair

Show some responsibilty
To fix what you broke
I have a sense of humour
Still this was no joke

You can stop apologising
Its been already done
My heart waiting to mend
It is not what I call fun

Think of this heart of mine
It is attached to reality
Broken strings need repair
Only you have the key

Hope ©2005
Link to poem with music and graphic below
http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_795998.html

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-11-22 11:05 AM

Beautifully written. My heart still needs to be fixed a little since Greg turned out to be a jerk. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2005-11-22 12:19 PM

Sadly though, those that will break it, never have the guts to fix it I am afraid, and in that a lesson is always learned. Nice writing Hope.

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