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Thekidfre'
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0 posted 2005-11-21 02:18 PM


Pictures placed perfect each with a smile
The photographs of the past represent me as a child

Trying to grow up in this wild world
An atmosphere consisting of boys and girls

Introductions are made and changes occur
It’s all on instinct and the decisions are pure

Ages are fragile no matter how old or young
Influences play a big part in who we become

The almighty dollar sign we fall subject to chase
Social statures are made and groups we are placed

In my little bubble I won’t concern myself like others so naturally do
I will take what’s coming to me and fully accept life’s dues

A year ago I was nothing like this
I never new life’s love and its organic bliss

Open your minds and release all the hate
Stand up for yourselves and live great

Remember "one day at a time" as a source of relief
And what you seek is what you reap


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-11-21 02:26 PM


KidFre~
You sound as if you've been able to take a huge dose of wisdom~

I enjoyed reading the penning of your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Martie
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2 posted 2005-11-21 02:41 PM


Thekidfre'

I agree with Marge...seems you've learned wisdom ....that usually takes such a long time.  Enjoyed this!  

Thekidfre'
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3 posted 2005-11-21 08:20 PM


Thank you for the kind words.


Thekidfre'

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4 posted 2005-11-22 09:34 AM


Watch THIS rookie, folks -- we gots us some quality here!

I like the way you see the subtle qualities of things and spin 'em right out -- atmosphere made of boys and girls...oooh I do love that kind of thing!

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5 posted 2005-11-22 12:23 PM


I agree with this poem as you can see by my signature.   Welcome to Passions as well.

To see real beauty you must look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

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