Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
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2005-11-20
10:44 PM
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Still
days lead days, all long gone by when first you searched into my eyes looked deep and fell into my soul and passed from young onto the old
still I mesmerize you
you say ‘tis so, my eyes still glow of love and life and laughter fine and you say how can it be so that rare am I as fine aged wine
still I inebriate you
you attempt to quietly understand this aging woman in your embrace calmly gaze with fond desire at the feathered lines about my face
still I puzzle you
emotions rampant run within most thin the essence of my skin and deep the well of love to find when you whisper, “come, be mine”
still I mystify you
know that forever there will be a “still” as wildflowers come to springtime’s hill as passion bends thus to loving will there shall always be the “still”
in the still of the night in the silent of embrace in the still of always in the tranquil of grace
there shall be this still for you the one that mesmerizes and inebriates the puzzle of the mystery there shall always be the still of me
long until tomorrow
Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ
[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-20-2005 11:41 PM).]
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Karilea Rilling Jungel
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Martie
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California
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2005-11-20
11:02 PM
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Sissie....what a sigh you just made within me....and what a voice you have in this...amazed again by you!!
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Nightshade
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just out of reach
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2005-11-20
11:38 PM
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in the still of the night in the silent of embrace in the still of always in the tranquil of grace
Just beautiful hugs, ChrisPoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. ~Carl Sandburg
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Sunshine
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2005-11-20
11:45 PM
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Martie, I had need to visit the archives today, and when I ran across this one, for special reasons, saw names on it of poets that can no longer respond, except, in heart, and in archives....
We were fortunate enough to see their names once; we are even more blessed to know that their names will live on in our archives...like a great networked library...lives will live on...and words will live on....
and emotions...will be forever strong, in all that was given to us....
Chris?
Thank you, my dear...for coming home from the summer, to grace our winters....
you shine upon all with love.
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miscellanea
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OH
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2005-11-21
12:12 PM
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So beautiful, Sunshine. Still. Oh, yes. Understanding this. Think I'll tuck it away in my library... hugs, misce
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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
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2005-11-21
08:24 AM
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Amazing!
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-11-21
08:30 AM
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Sunshine Your heart beat beats within my dreams And will forever, to me it seems.
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2005-11-21
09:34 AM
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So lovely...spoken in a whisper..still. Hugs for this keeper~NancyNow - while the leaves still dance on the wind While the moon and the clouds come spinning Will you whisper my name again? Again...and again...
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Robert Frazier
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2005-11-21
11:26 AM
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"my eyes still glow"
yes, they do!
Robert
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luminosity
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2005-11-21
02:00 PM
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you have words that bring light....tis no wonder you are one of my favorite poets
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Kit McCallum
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2005-11-21
02:00 PM
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Karlea, this is really beautiful. I stopped in for a moment, for a refreshing break or a smile ... and I got both, along with a deep and appreciative sigh. This is just lovely.
Best wishes, /Kit
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garysgirl
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Florida, USA
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2005-11-21
02:50 PM
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So very beautiful and peaceful, sweet lady Sunshime. And I still love reading you, my friend. Hugs, Ethel
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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
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2005-11-21
07:33 PM
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This is just so BEAUTIFUL!
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
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2005-11-21
07:47 PM
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still they reach into our hearts all those who made us feel real hugs to you
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Thekidfre'
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2005-11-21
08:28 PM
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Well done! The words and approach very inspirational to me!
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fmlbarebackrider2001
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2005-11-21
08:40 PM
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Wonderfully done! For not being a mushy type of person this touched my heart.
God Bless, CoryKnow yourself before you try to know someone else.
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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
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2005-11-22
02:09 AM
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You never cease to bring me to my knees, and beg for such boundless words. thank you for being you.
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Gentle Spirit
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2005-11-22
08:58 AM
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so many Mom, that are so very missed....
thank you for remembering them, and keeping them alive on these pages of blue.
HUGS
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