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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-11-16 09:53 AM


There are dark strangers
with romantic hearts and nakdthoughts
residing as dark angels
who open their little wings
to Martie who spreads sunshine upon the
suthern winds that blow
through the land of serenity
where castle guards glow
like the midnitesun

lighting the way
for earth angels to play
a myenchantedmelody
while this diamonds
inkedgoddess
picks
mistylilacs along
the sea where
the ghost of yesterday
conjures up an Enchantress
dancing to the tune
of Ratleaders rhapsody;

a symphony of gemjops
and greeneyes,
such a sweet babygirlwlove
gifting her angelheart
through the nightshade
of crimson tears

that seeps life into the
Goldenrose

of Hope.


live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-11-16 10:23 AM


How beautiful and very creative Donna!
Lovely...absolutely beautiful!
~Hugs for including me too~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2005-11-16 10:24 AM


LOVE IT!!!

beautifully done and love the pic of you....so so pretty!

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-11-16 10:25 AM


Yes! Echoing my sister Enchantress's words.
thankyou Donna !
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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4 posted 2005-11-16 10:37 AM


Amazing -- I couldn't do this on a fifty-dollar bet!

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littlewing
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5 posted 2005-11-16 10:53 AM


Good Lord, that was beautiful, Donna!
And most surely, brought a smile to this face.

Thank you.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-11-16 10:57 AM


ah dear friends
see what a lil boredom at work
can do for ones thought processes??  

lmao....it has been so long since I have written
I needed the inpsirations, so thank you my friends
for the wonderful inspiration.  Things are settling
down now that we are settled in our new home
and I hope to spend much more time here
being "inspired"

thanks to all, and hugs!
PEACE

and suz?  if it made you smile?
then I am twice blessed!!

HopeS
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7 posted 2005-11-16 11:21 AM


Awwww Donna thank you , that was precious

Hope  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2005-11-16 03:16 PM


I don't mind at all Donna,
this was a beautiful and a very creative tribute,

very talented you are, loved it!

Hugs~ARH


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2005-11-16 04:27 PM


wonderfully done, Donna...
thank you

M

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10 posted 2005-11-16 04:33 PM






(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, yay, Passions has always indeed felt just like a second family to me, often I get real sentimental feeling the fact that I have literally grown up here, and everyone like you who have watched me grow are like the fans on the sidelines! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Midnitesun
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Gaia
11 posted 2005-11-16 10:07 PM


nicely done!
hey, for putting me in the party lineup!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
12 posted 2005-11-16 10:10 PM


to Martie who spreads sunshine upon the

~*~

love that lies between the lines...
here hope doesn't fade, but gathers in
to rainbow's delight, and a Shenachie...
borrows from the morning dew...

to beg poets...

write!

~*~

Donna...

you've penned a



love,

Mom

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
13 posted 2005-11-16 10:16 PM


A name isn't just a name, you wrote them beautifully
and honor them all in the best possible way.

How clever of you, Donna dear, this is so very special.

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2005-11-17 05:04 AM


I feel honoured to have made your poem Donna..thank you very much...such a unique poem...this should be as an introduction to the front of the PIP and one that is continually added to as others join, then we are all together, joined as one in one long poem of life.

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

CastleGuard
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15 posted 2005-11-17 11:11 AM



A clever way to incorporate a small part of the PIP family into this poetic tribute.

I feel honored to have been included in such a company.

Thank you, Donna.

CG

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
16 posted 2005-11-17 11:51 AM


Donna, dear Donna, your gentle-spirited gift of words put a smile upon my heart.

~ This tapestry of poets was a pleasure to read. You wove the names masterfully!

I was especially partial to the following lines:

"lighting the way
for earth angels to play"  

Love & Light and a great big hug and smile!
Linda

Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
17 posted 2005-11-17 12:33 PM


How very clever!
luminosity
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18 posted 2005-11-18 10:53 AM


very creative and complimentary to you and the poets you write of
LeeJ
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19 posted 2005-11-18 02:47 PM


and this called a work in progress, stills the heart of every reader, loved this, and so aptly fits all those who post in this blue page of family.

Donna, your a wonder

Dark Angel
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20 posted 2005-11-18 04:31 PM


Oh this is just magic Bella....

please forgive me for taking so long to get here.

Really beautiful this and you.

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Gentle Spirit
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21 posted 2005-11-22 08:53 AM


thank you each, for stopping in.
I am pleased that you enjoyed!

Dark Stranger
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22 posted 2005-11-22 09:12 AM


ms donna..
you do us all proud
and I too like the photo
lovely ms

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