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Angelheart
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0 posted 2005-11-19 03:15 PM


        

Cloudy skies on a rainy day
makes everything dark
clouds turn to another part

Clouds making circles
its making rain
all this is very plain

I feel in my inner-heart
in my inner-soul
I feel it like an angel
is in the middle there
showing her love
being bold

        


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2005-11-19 03:37 PM




(does cloudgazing jitterbug) Yay! That white beam within the clouds certainly looks like a little angel if you tilt your head down to the right slightly, yay! (smiles) This is soooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Angelheart
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2 posted 2005-11-19 09:03 PM


Thanks Mistletoe Angel~  You have such a sweet heart yourself, Godbless ya always

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
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jax
3 posted 2005-11-20 01:33 PM


this is so cute i love it thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

Margherita
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4 posted 2005-11-20 03:28 PM


You see what is meant to be seen, the heart of things.

Very nice write.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-11-21 07:21 AM


Laura Love ~

Noah's right! I do see an angel in the light! I think you had some divine help with this one!

Have a wonderful day, little one!

EA

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