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Lost Love
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Lost Love |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Lost Love Though days and weeks and months, have come and gone, Without the comfort found within your kiss, The memories of what we shared live on And haunt my nights with ghosts of love amiss. Reliving love gone wrong through gifts of care You’ve blessed me with in times forever lost, Would burden me far more than I could bear As evidence of love and all its cost. Forgive me then my love for being weak, But how could I be strong without you near? Your strength is mine and all we share unique, While living loss would be a life of fear. But though I strive within to let you go, You’re still the best of all I’ll ever know. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing... M |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~William, You have a tender, and romantic heart, one I like peeking into! ~Thanks for the peek! ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ I 'almost' missed this beauty~ Thank you for sharing such lovely Sonnet's with us~ This is just gorgeous~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
I love sonnets. And I loved this one. Good work. Not many of those around these days... Pity. CG |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
brought tears to my eyes. thanks for sharing My spirit will rise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
David So very beautiful and so well done!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, we see so few sonnets here....and that's our loss, because it's one of the few rhymed poetry forms that still has any appeal outside the English Department. Well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome aboard, David! You have gifted us with a fine sonnet to enjoy! Thank you! ~ May you find such a love encore. Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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